Yes I was able to see patterns, of similar formatting style for topic and transitions each paragraph and topic change. I was also able to see the patterns of relating everything back to my thesis. I definitely rely on repetition of phrases a little too much especially when it comes to concluding my paper. I am going to make sure my conclusion is more fresh and new for the reader. I definitely do not use a lot of transitional words and I may add a few of those in my paper, I think I can use these to clear up some of my confusing areas in my essay.
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What an unexpected insight to gain from this exercise! Well done!